Grammar correction thread

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Re: Grammar correction thread

Postby Folder » Thu Jan 12, 2017 8:23 am

-/clap emote

"Vhexim applaud."

add an S? Or some more flavor text? :)

-/duel emote

"Vhexim pulls a glove from out of nowhere slapping it straight across your face! A customary challenge to a duel!"

Should be "Vhexim pulls a glove from out of nowhere slapping it straight across your face, a customary challenge to a duel!"
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Re: Grammar correction thread

Postby Clown » Wed Jan 25, 2017 10:19 am

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Re: Grammar correction thread

Postby Folder » Thu Feb 23, 2017 8:52 am

King Cobra:
Don't get to close, you may get yourself killed.

Should be TOO close.
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Re: Grammar correction thread

Postby Folder » Sat Feb 25, 2017 5:48 pm

A yeren jumps out a bush...

While that sounds thuglife it probably needs an OF :D.
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Re: Grammar correction thread

Postby Cerebrus » Sat Feb 25, 2017 9:18 pm

Folder wrote:A yeren jumps out a bush...

While that sounds thuglife it probably needs an OF :D.


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Re: Grammar correction thread

Postby Tucker » Thu Jun 22, 2017 12:04 am

Found a small one in the first cemetery quest. The father asks you to kill 'Poltergiests' or some misspelling of it. The mobs are Poltergeists, in the next quest in which you also kill Poltergeists it's spelled correctly.

Quest Number/Name: #4401 Helping the Priest

Quest Giver: Father Arstos (The Crumbling Chapel).

Room is 4406.

Edit: Same spelling occurs in Father Arstos' blurb for quest number 4403 'poltergiests'
Double Edit: Same blurb as first edit asks for "clumbs of dirt"

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Re: Grammar correction thread

Postby Grahf » Thu Sep 13, 2018 8:34 am

Terrified child

I might have just found the SOUCE of the evil here in the wastelands. It seems there are some cultist recruiters turning our people and infecting them with evil. I need you to kill these recruiters to stop them.


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